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Blud D Mess

aka the guy who does arts

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  • I live in Somewhere in Glen
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  • Yo bro! It's BEN!!

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  • LONG MESSAGE, READ IT ALL.

    Now, to be honest, I think you chose your theme very poorly. No offense, but nothing in you animations has truly said "Mafia" to me. Really. These guys don't look at all like mobsters, the setting doesn't fit, and you seem to be taking a Tricky-like Madness side to the story, what with the MMV2, zombies and Mike.

    Which really doesn't seem to fit your title to the series.

    HOWEVER, I did some research on some mobster-like outfits and ranks, and I made some new goons for you. The sprite sheet isn't complete, but I do want you to take the whole mafia thing a bit more seriously. It's like you ran out of ideas to make the bad guys and just took the AAHW and stamped 'Mafia' on them. When you say mafia, whatever is going on in this series is not what i think of.

    Mafiadoods


    Now, take a look at the pic I've included.

    Now THESE guys are mobsters. I would suggest you introduce the Caporegime in your fifth episode, since you are introducing MMV2 in the fourth. Don't ask me how I got your MMV2 sprites. It's magic. Anyway, according to mafia ranks, the Caporegime (the guy in the purple shades and tie) would be a person who was ranked just below the Consigliere and underboss (who in this case would be Mike), who is under the Mob Boss (Mafialeader). Or, if you are planning on having a twist (Like a guy above the Mafialeader) then Mike would be the Consigliere, Maifialeader the Underboss, and Mr. Mystery the Mob Boss. Anyway, back to the Caporegime. These guys would be like your A.T.P. agents; they would lead groups of mafia men and basically order them around. They would also be a lot smarter then the other doods (they would use cover and not dive straight into bullets.

    The hitmen, well I guess you can figure that out. These guys wouldn't be below the Caporegime, but not above him either. They are more like the head guy's private people who would get special jobs done, work as security, or of course, paid to kill off somebody.

    Mafialeader

    Now in regards to the Mafialeader, I believe we should give him a proper name to use alongside his nickname the 'Mafialeader'. But it must be nice and Italian or Sicilian, especially since we need to make up for giving Mike the most unoriginally non-mafia name ever. I suggest calling him Gaetano, I don't care if you decide he needs a last name. Also, I hope to give him a new outfit. I mean really, people that high up in the chain wouldn't be wearing the same old suit as any other joe-schmoe. I suggest we give him a nice vest or fur coat. But of course, we can still see the bandages underneath. Take a look at the pic on the left here to see what I mean. And what's good about the outfit, is that it doesn't matter what episode we change it in. In fact, I recommend you change it in Mafia Madness 4. I'll give you sprites later. And then maybe later on in the series we can alter his beard like Jesus' beard changed, but in a different style.

    And regarding Mike? Really, I don't care what you do with him, he's already strayed way too far away from the Mafia theme to make him seem like a mobster. You can go along with the crazy-zombie-nutball theme.

    Oh, and you should give Kage some allies. That would be nice.

    And regarding the buildings, maybe I'll do a bit of art for the backgrounds, but not full rooms. I'll do some nice mafia themed decor like pillars and couches and other stuff to make it feel more mafia-esque, but I don't want to do full backgrounds, I've already got to work on the ones for my Madness Assassin.

    Last but not least, weapons. You should give these guys fitting themed weapons. For your standard pistols, I recommend you use the Ruger .357, the Desert Eagle, the .500 Magnum, the Snub .500, the Colt Revolver, Snub Colt, and the gun you have the Mafialeader holding in your menu bio. Any other guns non-pistol wise work, although I definatly recommend you use the Thompson and other classic guns.

    Now, last but not least, if I'm going to be in this, I'd like to know what your plans are for the future episodes of Mafia Madness. Send me plot details in a PM on DeviantART, it's too public here. And I know even this message is pushing it on here, I had to post it here because it's really easy to include pictures. That, and the fact that you would likely check here first. :3

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    • Yes, they Are.

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    • Lucky enough, I Decompled the "Tommy gun" along the the rest of the M:PN V1.7 stuff

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  • Alright, well first of all, let me say that you should really watch your grammar. There are at least 3 spelling errors I found on the main page that I'll fix later. And also, not everything should be capitalized. For example, you renamed 'Mafia men' to 'Mafia Men'. You see, 'men' is not a proper name, and therfore shouldn't be capitalized. Just trust me if I leave something with or without capital letters.

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  • Well I know this is still in development, but I really suggest you change the background. Really, I mean copying the background from the Madness Wiki probably isn't the best idea. Try something more original, more fitting to Mafia Madness. Or just look up something different on google images. Like this image for example; http://www.newgrounds.com/dump/draw/09b0c79da4d3b652ece0d03ec2947b69

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